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We’ve made this into nothing more
Then a beautiful game of Tug o’ War,
One heart this way; bring me down,
One heart that way; turn it around.
We both hold knives, tapered and sharp
Ready to tear the other apart,
With one little action and one little word
We send anger off to flutter like a bird.
Up to the heavens and through our clouds
Until we’re wounded and falling straight down.
And then when we’ve landed our wings return
We soar to the limits until the sun begins to burn.
But one without the other falls harder than Us,
Through the stony ground with fire, smoke and dust.
And a little crimson trickle visited us both once,
The past is the past, but still the blade will hunt.
And even though we’ve fallen because of the other
We snap like a band and pull back together.
So once again our wings are failing,
Plummeting down with screams and limbs flailing.
But we always land on top, count on it,
And we'll be up in the clouds until one is hit.
©2005-2009 ~DeathbyFire
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Author's Comments

I don't know what structure this is, probably nothing really. They're rhyming couplets but that's all I know. I guess it's not really important. Basically, I wrote this for the sentimental value, not the skill or quality. Enjoy.

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I like it, even if there isn't a fancy structure. The words, meaning, and deep feelings described are amazing. Lovely job, and another fave. :hug:
:icondeathbyfire:
Heh, thank you. I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the :+fav: :hug:

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~Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."~
:iconsetmysoulaflame:
LOVE IT!!!
I know what it's about and WHO IT"S ABOUT lol and you captured it on the nose lol

ORANGE COOKIE BARZ...

:( I wish I had yellow or any color at the moment I'm colorless oh well...

awesome jawb!!!
:icondeathbyfire:
lol YES! Not that hard to guess who ^^; Thanks! :)

YES! lol I could go for some right about now ;)

Aww *hugs* You'll find another color soon! lol.

Thanks again!

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~Quoth the raven, "Nevermore."~

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